would you want to read this book?

xoxotigergirl asked:


i am starting another book. It’s called royal runaways(help me think of a better name plz)and here’s the summary. i need opinions and comments! Again, I’m only 10, so plz try not to be very rude and mean. And again, I know that I still have lots to learn about writing(which makes me very exited) but i still want the truth, though i don’t want it really harshly. Thx!!!! =)

here it is:

Princess Kayla’s life was just about perfect. She had everything. A love, a most caring brother and sister, a kingdom, a palace full of gold, beautiful clothes, a ravishing figure,and her coronation was arriving soon. She had everything a 20-year old girl could want.

But things take on a twist when Price Ty’s kingdom gets robbed. The people of his land are framing his father,thinking he wishes to have all the gold to himself and leave the peasants starving.now, Kayla is forbidden to have any contact with Ty, as it would give their kingdom a bad name. Two days later, her beloved brother is murdered in the most gruesome manner. And Kayla really kills a woman. The woman who murdered her brother. And when Kayla thinks that it couldn’t be any worse, she finds that servants inside the palace were being executed by the same hand that assassinated her brother. The one she had killed.
So Princess Kayla and Price Ty runaway to a distant land. Kayla secretly wants to track down the witch that killed so many, but never told Ty about her little quest. A clueless Ty follows her lead. Once they track down the vile woman, will they be able to accomplish the impossible; kill a witch woman? Or will the witch murder them as she did Kayla’s brother, then continue to slaughter anyone else she sees until she wipes out the entire world? Who knows?

But one things for sure: Kayla was going to track down this witch woman and attempt to kill her, even if it cost her her life.Even if it did no harm, she knew that if she was going to die, she would choose to die fighting for her people with her last breath.

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